Phenomenal series! So many things to like - the way it slowly develops, the connection to Dixie's reputation as a sissymaker, the great dialogue and descriptions. I also want to shout out the way you mixed first person narration with pure dialogue caps and how you changed Dixie's pronoun from "she" to "he" after her clitty is discovered. Really, really great job!
Phenomenal series! So many things to like - the way it slowly develops, the connection to Dixie's reputation as a sissymaker, the great dialogue and descriptions. I also want to shout out the way you mixed first person narration with pure dialogue caps and how you changed Dixie's pronoun from "she" to "he" after her clitty is discovered. Really, really great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I was quietly proud of my subtle pronoun shenanigans but I didn't want to toot my own horn too much so I'm glad it got picked up on.
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