(Way Too Long) First Person Caption

This caption started off simple, I just wanted a sissy who used to hate the way she was treated and now loves it and is begging her black owner not to leave and instead stay and fuck her. Then I got romantic.
New subtleties kept seeming like good ideas to include and eventually I ended up with this beast where word limits have been binned and that I refuse to cut down. To fit to my format it has to be brought down a shitty looking and I think difficult to read 10pt font.
But I do like a lot of the details I could fit in with the extra length (phrasing) so I'm ambivalent about it. I'd love to hear others' thoughts on it, just don't get used to it.